Fractured Fairy Tales

The ending of the story 

she started to walk towards the castle but then realised she had to walk through a screen maze but she saw yellow spheres all around the maze then she heard pwp pwp pwp pwp pwp then she ran out the noise got louder then she started to panic she ran through the maze and then saw ghosts pink, red, orange, blue, and green ghosts then she heard the pwp pwp pwp she saw a yellow figure eating with it’s mouth open she screamed and ran past every ghost the ghosts started to chase her then she saw something flashing blue and white and it looked yummy so she ate it and then the ghosts started to go away then she wasn't so afraid but she was still a bit because pwp pwp pwp she ran faster than she reached some how to get through the maze without a scratch then she reached this massive peach shaped hedge than she saw the green frogga wearing a peach costume and a horn then she saw princess peach with a go kart in her hand and a surprise box lying on the ground then sac-girl saw princess peach wack the surprise box and it went flying and then princess peach shouted I won after that sac-girl went and sneaked and saw princess peach going to kill the mad wralph than cupid popped out of mad ralph's head and the princess shouted get him so ghosts and space invaders started to chase cupid and then she followed cupid and where he was going then 2 hours later she saw a massive castle with armed minions then she said who are you going to fight and the minion whispered princess peach then she saw princess peach's army was fading away but then pwp pwp pwp then the army came and there was pac-man princess peach and here army then the minions charged and after 2 years of fighting the minions won but princess peach and pac-man were still there just the invaders and ghosts were dead then she saw them chasing her then she ran through the maze and went all the way where the mad Wralph lived but then pac-man court her and sac-girl woke up and saw sac-man and she saw a centipede climb up her shoulder.

My refelction 

I found this easy because I had a massive idea already in my mind

The story all put together

once a game ago lived sac-girl and her brother sac-man they were lying in the sun and playing on their devices, when sac-girl found a frog that looked like frogga. So she ran and saw it again she saw it go into the sky,  like he was going to heaven, so she climbed the tree and started going up like an angel going to heaven she screamed like a sloth but no one heard her. when she was in the clouds she saw some juice it said pls drink me so she drank it but then she saw a cake it said eat me pls so she ate. then she saw a door that was so small then she drank the juice but then she didn't realise there was a key on the table, so she ate the rest of the cake and took the key and drank the drink and put the key in the keyhole, and then she was in arcade land.when she entered she saw the mario brothers they where mario and luigi they looked fatter than the actual game when sac-girl said how do I get out they said go to the wreck it wralph man and fix it felix so luigi and mario told the direction and she stroked and went to wreck it wralph but on the way she saw frogga so she followed it and she came to a big tree house. when she went inside she heard frogga say him early I need to be there early then she came face to face but then he just carried on then when she came outside she saw some carrots so she ate them because she was starving but the rabbit said stop don't eat then you will become bigger but then she said that's just what I want she kissed the frogga and ate and ran away then she ran and saw centipede and sac girl mumbled how do I get out and centipede said go to the mad wralph she said how do I get there and he said go straight and then I don't know so she went strat but on the way she meet cupid then sac girl barked how do I get to mad wralph go left then turn left again then go straight and so sac girl went left then left again then she went strat and meet mad wralph at a tea party and fix it felix then sac girl asked at the tea mad wralph was having fun pouring into a tea cup on the fix it felix cap when the mad wralph saw sac girl and he shouted “Welcome!” and Fix it Felix also shouted “good aye!” they also both Mumbled “Come and join us!” then alice said okay and alice asked “I want to see the green Frogga where is it” then the mad wralph said at the princess peach's castle and pac mans castle so sac girl Whispered “Thanks” an dsac girl saw the massive pink castle with a peach logo on it and sac girl went to go and do her second adventure. she started to walk towards the castle but then realised she had to walk through a screen maze but she saw yellow spheres all around the maze then she heard pwp pwp pwp pwp pwp then she ran out the noise got louder then she started to panic she ran through the maze and then saw ghosts pink, red, orange, blue, and green ghosts then she heard the pwp pwp pwp she saw a yellow figure eating with it’s mouth open she screamed and ran past every ghost the ghosts started to chase her then she saw something flashing blue and white and it looked yummy so she ate it and then the ghosts started to go away then she wasn't so afraid but she was still a bit because pwp pwp pwp she ran faster than she reached some how to get through the maze without a scratch then she reached this massive peach shaped hedge than she saw the green frogga wearing a peach costume and a horn then she saw princess peach with a go kart in her hand and a surprise box lying on the ground then sac-girl saw princess peach wack the surprise box and it went flying and then princess peach shouted I won after that sac-girl went and sneaked and saw princess peach going to kill the mad wralph than cupid popped out of mad ralph's head and the princess shouted get him so ghosts and space invaders started to chase cupid and then she followed cupid and where he was going then 2 hours later she saw a massive castle with armed minions then she said who are you going to fight and the minion whispered princess peach then she saw princess peach's army was fading away but then pwp pwp pwp then the army came and there was pac man princess peach and here army then the minions charged and after 2 years of fighting the minions won but princess peach and pac man were still there just the invaders and ghosts were dead then she saw them chasing her then she ran through the maze and went all the way where the mad wralph lived but then pacman court her and sac-girl woke up and saw sac-man and she saw a centipede climb up her shoulder.

Term 4 Week 6 2015

MY BLOG
On Tuesday I got braces I got 6 at the top and 6 down the bottom. In the morning I was so excited because I was getting my braces. So I got all ready to go to the orthodontist. At 9 am we hoped into the car and we drove for 45 minutes we went to new market that's were we went to get my braces the company is called Alpers Dental.

When we got there went up the stairs and sat down to wait for the orthodontist to get ready. At 9.48 we went into the room where I was going to get my braces. When I was in the chair the orthodontist whispered "lets get started' so they got started. They whispered when we put the glue on your teeth and put the braces on the glue there will be a bright light. So I closed my eyes the hole time because I just felt like it and at the end they will use a bright light.

When I got my braces on I went to school at about 12.30 when I was in class everybody crowded jokes they didn't but lots of people asked why purple and why ye getting them so young man and you look swag with pink man THE END.

Fractured Fairy Tales Sac-Girl In ArcadeLand

2nd part of sac girl in arcade land 

when she went inside she heard Frogga say him early I need to be there early then she came face to face but then he just carried on then when she came outside she saw some carrots so she ate them because she was starving but the rabbit said stop don't eat then you will become bigger but then she said that's just what I want she kissed the Frogga and ate and ran away then she ran and saw centipede and sac girl mumbled how do I get out and centipede said go to the mad Wralph she said how do I get there and he said go straight and then I don't know so she went straight but on the way she meet cupid then sac girl barked how do I get to mad Wralph go left then turn left again then go straight and so sac girl went left then left again then she went straight and meet mad wralph at a tea party and Fix it Felix then sac girl asked at the tea mad wralph was having fun pouring into a tea cup on the Fix it Felix cap when the mad Wralph saw sac girl and he shouted “Welcome!” and Fix it Felix also shouted “good aye!” they also both Mumbled “Come and join us!” then sac girl asked “I want to see the green Frogga where is it” then the mad wralph said at the princess peach's castle and pac mans castle so sac girl Whispered “Thanks” an dsac girl saw the massive pink castle with a peach logo on it and sac girl went to go and do her second adventure.

Words Instead Of Said

My Reflection
I found this easy because I know what words to use instead of said because I have a big vocabulary
My next step is to use more exsotik words.

Term 4 Week 5 2015

                                 My Blog
                                     
On the weekend me and my family did fire works. We had massive ones. When the sun went down completely we went outside and started. We used small ones first we used some that where left over from last year. They where real small ones they span like a ball that was flashing and spurting out colorful sparks.

Next we used some bigger ones. The fireworks where white sparks but they where so loud. We used about 5 of those then we went for this big square one, it was a massive spark that was flashing white sparks into the air about 2 meters high. Then we did some more I can't remember some but I know they where cool. But I do remember that one was so cool it was like two big sparks that went into the air.

finally we did the biggest one it was massive and heavy for its size. When we lighted it we stepped back and saw 10 massive sparks blowing up in the sky it was an awesome night The end.

Language Features in stories

Lanugage Features in stories

Abverbs easily immediately eelegantly suddenly scarcely sweetly pretty bitterly beautifully certainly evidently brightly

simele Handsome like a tulip long as a thumb

adgective handsome golden-colored leaves velvet delicate graceful large managed barley corn flower tulip in appearance beautiful kissed real and little maiden polished, ugly cockchafers slim. cockchafers believed daisy loveliest  imagine tender delicate  Tiny blades dew twittered benumbed embed wallow remained burned disagreeable unwilling marry greater frozen  strongest uncovered, countries, whispered delighted.

describing words for Thumbelina the story

reflection

I found this hard because I't took so long and there where so many words I couldn't find them all even though it took me a long time.

Fractured Fairy Tail Term 4 week 5

Once a game ago lived sac-girl and her brother sac-man they were lying in the sun and playing on their devices, when sac-girl found a frog that looked like Frogga. So she ran and saw it again she saw it go into the sky,  like he was going to heaven, so she climbed the tree and started going up like an angel going to heaven she screamed like a sloth but no one heard her. When she was in the clouds she saw some juice it said pls drink me so she drank it but then she saw a cake it said eat me pls so she ate. Then she saw a door that was so small then she drank the juice but then she didn't realise there was a key on the table, so she ate the rest of the cake and took the key and drank the drink and put the key in the keyhole, and then she was in arcade land.When she entered she saw the mario brothers they where Mario and Luigi they looked fatter than the actual game when sac-girl said how do I get out they said go to the wreck it Wralph man and fix it Felix so Luigi and Mario told the direction and she stroked and went to wreck it Wralph. On the way she saw frogga she went and followed it and she hered it say I'm early so she kept following it until she found a massive lily pad house.

My reflection

I learnt that fractured fairy tales is changing the hole story exept the story line. My next step is to add more detail.

Narrative Writing Structure

World Cup Recount

MY Blog 

First On the weekends there was a rugby game it was a final All Blacks vs the Wallabies. NZ won 34-17. At the start Australia kicked of. We got the ball and ran with it we got tackled 100 times and did not get a try because they got the ball. That happened a few times but the on the 38th minute Conrad Smith passed to Aaron smith then Aaron smith passed to Richie Macaw then Richie macaw passed to Scutter and Scutter scored . Then the whistle went for half time.

Next Dan Carter kicked of new Zealand nearly got the ball then we tackled and tackled and tackled then we got the ball but then they got the ball and scored because Ben smith got sin bin yellow card for 10 minutes. then they scored again then Ben smith came on then we scored ma a Nono scored. then on the 79th minute when Buaden  barrette came on for Scutter then Ben smith did a grubber and Buaden Barrette kicked it again then he court it and he scored a try, Then we new we were the champions because they kicked to us and we kicked it out on the 80th minute. Then we got the gold medals and took the trophy home the END

My Blog

                                      My Blog
Last week we did athletics we did five activity's four of them were to see if we were in the top 4 in our age group I didn't make it in for anything because 1 I had a wart on my toe so I couldn't run as fast as I could and I couldn't do long jump properly because I had the wart on my toe but I was so close to make it in for soft ball throw and I didn't want to jump on my right foot which had my wart on so I failed the jump on high jump it was all because of my wart.

when I went in my age group We went to the games area we played dogeball and octopus that was booring then we went to sprints I got in the semi final but not ing the final then we went to lunch after lunch we did softball throw I came 7 but not in the final that was sad then we went to long jump I did so bad because of my wart then we did high jump I jumped on my left foot because my right foot had my wart on it so I jumped on my left foot but i am a right footer so I failed the jump after that we went to our class and that was the end of the day.

Bias and non Bias

Grandad

Term 4 Week 2

                                                         My reflection
                      I found this easy because I have already learnt fact or opinion

Term 4 Week 2

Good morning everybody to my blog so on the weekends went to a mans house the mans name was called rob Harley he was in hospital about 2 weeks ago his liver was disintegrating basically but he survived the Doctor said its a 0 out of 3 but he survived and he was at his house alone but then we came when we were there we had lunch I had two bread rolls.

after  I had lunch I played on my mums Ipad because my mum and dad where talking about boring stuff with Rob so I played on her Ipad after that we went down to the beach and played in the sand dunes then we went to Phil's Ice cream and had a frozen yogurt ice cream it was yummy and I was glade I put it in my tummy after we went to Phil's ice cream I went to an audition for chocolate.

after the audition we went up and picked a couch up for my room because I am having a room makeover when we got home we put my couch into my bedroom then we ate dinner and went to bed the end.

Term 4 Week 1 Reading

Term 4 Week 1 2015

Hello there in the holidays I went somewhere over the seas with my brother and mum and we went to ... New south Whales we landed at Sydney airport. After we went through all the security presages we went on a double Decker Train to Nowra you might be thinking why I'm going to such a strange place but I went there because my auntie and uncle and cousins live there when we got off the 3 hour train trip we meet my auntie at the train station then we hoped in her car and drove off to my aunties house when we got there I meet my 2 year old cousin and 0 year old cousin and my uncle I was so excited to be there it was my first time seeing there house when we got inside my two year old cousin showed me all of here stuff was so hilarious that's what she did for most of the day when it was dinner we had homemade Pizza after dinner we feed there massive dog dinner then I went to bed.

In the morning I got woken up by my cousin jumping on the bed when I was eating breakfast I dropped my boll and my cereal was everywhere it was so annoying after I got dressed and all that stuff we went to the beach and played with our cousins then we got ice blocks from the dairy and went home after that then we did all the stuff you do when its dinner time and then we went to sleep.

The next morning I woke up and had breakfast and then watched TV then my uncles brother came with loads of board games then we played 5 board games the reason why I'm not telling you the names is because I don't remember there names so then we had dinner feed the dog and went to bed In the morning it was my cousins birthday she was turning one then she opened here presents and she got all this nice stuff after we had breakfast we went to the zoo we saw gorillas, lions, Pigmy's, cheetah, tiger gibbons deer's emperor monkey, and so much more then we went home and played board games and had dinner and watch TV.

The morning after that we went to jump I did a somersault and landed on it and I jumped in the foam pit lots of times and had food then we went home and saw where my uncle works he works at a military base he is apart of the navy then we went home and had dinner and played board game and watch TV.

The morning after that morning we went to see PIXELS it was so cool after that we went home and played a board game watched TV and had dinner and feed the dog then we went to bed.

In the morning we took my older cousin to the movies and watch this boring kiddie movie but she enjoyed it allot then we went home and watched TV and played with my cousin then we went to bed and feed the dog.

The last day was today we left the house and went to the train station to go to the airport when we got to Sydney we went to the lint Cafe we went to the tower and we went to the apple store where my brother bought the new wireless beats headphones then we went to the airport and went to New Zealand.
                                    
            

Term 3 Week 9 Maths

                             My reflection

I found this hard because when I got up to the right corner I got one thing wrong and it got lots of gaps my next step is to draw it without doing one mistake so I get it perfect.

Kensukes Kingdom Chapter 5 Term 3 Week 8

                                                 My reflection
I found this easy because I used my inference skills to try to work out some of these questions My next step is to think more carefully so I get a bit closer.
closer.

Term 3 Week 7 3/9/15

                                                       My Reflection

I found this easy because I already new what faces where, corners and edges where so it was easy my next step is to probably check to make sure if I got it right or not.

Term 3 week 7 2015 2.9.15

On Monday Afternoon we walked over to the auditorium to see the Kapa Haka People Perform and Lendon park Perform For the whole school my friend Deshontayne was Performing I new he was nerves because he was going to do A Mihi in front of 600 people when they where about to start Mr Matua Fiensa said this going to be a dress rahusle and we will also be able to see lendon park perform.

Firstly when The kapa Haka got start they started with a song that was called te whenua after that they did a Haka what they did was they where jumping up and down and doing criss crossing with rakow sticks after that My friend Dee was about to do his Mihi because he was doing the Mihi he was wearing a Korowai when he came out and he did his Mihi everyone clapped I was Astonished that he remembered all of those Maori words.

Secondly when he finished Oliver, Jade and Yr 6 Jade said a Maori speech to lead the boys into a Haka when they started they did all these actions Than at the end they went under peoples legs and did the Pukana it was funny because Moriora was smiling with his tongue out after that everyone clapped.

Thirdly they did another Haka they did cool actions and stuff I cant remember all of it but at the end they didn't do a pukana they just said he I think.

After that the Kapa Haka group swapped with lendon perk when lendon park where ready they sang a few songs I don't know what songs they where tho after that I little boy did a Mihi when he did it he did it really Loud than they sang another song when they sang they did so loud as loud as a Wombat but I don't even know if a wombat is loud doesn't mater you get the idea.

After that They did a Haka when they did it it was so Loud I when seriosly loud like I could hear it from the field loud it wasn't very scary tho when they where nere the end of the haka one of the kids doing the haka yowled like a Bush baby and a bush baby loud man they are very loud now.

Finally when they nearly finished they sang one more song than The end... I was so tied after that I was in the auditorium for so long when they finished every body clapped when they finished and sate down when I sore Dee I put my Thumbs up and that when He did Well I reckon lendon park Where louder but Elm park had more actions and more enthusiastic and preformed better

Kensukes Kingdom

                                                   what we did
when we started the chapter we had to listen carefully. when we were reading we were tracking were they where going after we read the chapter we had to make a animation about it this is the animation that me and Joshua did this was very fun to do and hard at the same time but we are happy how we did it we also had a bit of fun at the end I thought this was very hard and fun at the same time.

Term 3 Week 6 2015

Today we went to Youth Town where we played... HOKEY it was really fun but disappointing at the end we played a really fun game at the start and at the end.

When we got in we sate next to a hockey stick and they told us through the steps

• hold the hockey stick with your weak hand up the top of the grip.
• hold the hockey stick with your strong hand down the bottom of the grip.
• Thumps up and Thumps down.
• Don't hold on very hard.
• Don't dribble with the round part

when they told us that we got up and dribbled a bit by our self and passed back and forth ten times than we went around and passed through our legs, went around the ball, passed the ball back and forth 5 times to our self. 

Than we played a really fun Game it is where you have to protect your so no one gets it but you have to get the ball out of the square it was really fun.

than we dribbled a bit by our self and passed back and forth ten times than we went around and passed through our legs, went around the ball, passed the ball back and forth 5 times to our self.

Than we played a really fun Game it is where you have to protect your so no one gets it but you have to get the ball out of the square it was really fun.

That is the end what now it was sad at the end because the girls only got to do the Game at the End the end.

Term 3 Week 3

                          My Reflection

I found this hard because we still didn't finish the wind  chimes yet so I didn't really know what to do at the end I think my next step is to think more carefully what words I put in.

Kensuke's Kingdom Chapter 2

                            My Reflection                       
I found this Tricky because it was hard finding the right facts My next step is to found better facts than I have found.

Term 3 Week 3

                                 My Blog                             

Do you know that Micah Guyan is Yr 4 and he came 8th out of the school and i'm so small i'm 128 inches I know that is very small 3rd in yr 4 I reckon i'm going to be in inter school .

When we went down to the  shade area I thought I wasn't going to do well in cross country but you never now whats going to happen when Mrs Howard called the Yr 4 boys I sprinted all the way to the gate than I jogged for a bit than I sprinted I was  coming 5th in Yr 4 and the school but I needed to came 1st I sprinted but I was still coming 5th until I court up and I was tying I was coming 4th.

When I was tying I passed him but than he started thrashing me now I was coming 5 again I started sprinting When I did my 1st lap I court up And started thrashing them tan I saw Deshontayne and I stopped than liam passed me than I started sprinting than I did my 2nd lap and I was going back than I saw Dee again than I ran passed him but than we stuck together than I passed him again than I was at the finish line.

well I'm sorry this was very short but there was not much to talk about so see you later bye bye.

Banana Milkshake

                           My Reflection                        

I have been learning to write a simple explanation. First I did a Brainstorm about my topic then I wrote my explanation I found this easy because I basicly just new what I wanted to write My next step is to describe more.

Year 4 Term 3 Week 2

On Thursday we did Cross Country we did it around all these houses and tree's I went around twice and did it in 15 . 2 seconds I wanted to do 3 laps but I wasn't allowed to.

First we walked to the shad area and talked whats going to happen we stade behind because we were getting times we I went I didn't really know were to go I just followed the people who did know I was quite anxios because I didn't want to do badly we went down to the bridge than we went up a little path way than we crossed the road to the area we were going to run than we were off.

When I was running I meat up with Nathan Ruhi and talked when we were running than I stopped to have a breath when I nearly did one lap when I meat up With Nathan again Nathan said "are you doing your second lap" and I said " No i'm not " but than Nathan said " You are doing your second lap because your past the !st Lap and I was like "oh" Onto my second lap.

On my second lap I was so exsoursted I was really tired and my throat was really hurting most of the time I stoped every like 2 minutes to have a deep breath but I was still so exsoursted I know that that was the most retiring run if done at school That was so exsoursted oh my gosh that was exsoursting Next Paragraph.

When I was nearly  finished my 2nd lap going to do my 3rd I went strate past the third lap but Mrs walker said Boy stop come here and don't do a 3rd lap and I was Bumed so Bumed Nooooooooo I said in my little brain Nooooooooooooo I was pretty annoyed but not many people did so it didn't matter that much but my time would be better than I ran on the road to the cool mine walk way dashed through every one that I stopped I saw People fighting Oh I said in my little head but I kept running and running
Next Paragraph.

When I got back to the shade area I stopped than I heard Mrs Melville saying come than I saw Daniel than I ran as fast as I could But I got the same time I don't care that much Because He didn't beat me my time was 15 Mins And 2 Secs By the way short is faster that's why I did Mins And Secs Kay back on Task Um what was I going to say oh ya um what no what ya what no ya I don't know what know I remember um Mrs Melville said Well done Micah I did pretty well for a year 4 doing 2 laps The END.

Features Of A Explanation

                     

                                 

                                                
                                                         MY REFLECTION
I Was Learning about the features of an explanation . I learnt by reading information on a slideshow and then doing a quiz. I got 9 out of 10 right. I though the quiz was easy because the wrong options where obviously the wrong option My next step is to use what I've learnt when I write explanations.

Mahatma Gandhi Quote - Poster

                                                                            MY REFLECTION
                                                         I am Learning to Create Well-Designed Poster
                                                 I Think I meat the Criteria because I think it's laid out well.
 My Next Step Is to Think More Of the background because the poster isn't really saying the message in the                                                                                     Quote.
                             

Term 2 Week 11 Art

                                                                MY REFLECTION
I found this tricky to do because I tried to copy a Maori man but this is what ended up I still liked it but I don't think it look's like a Maori god but i'm still happy
My next step is to copy more slowly because I did speed a bit at the end because if you see it's a bit uneven.

My Speech

                                                                                                                                                                    My Reflection

I found this easy because there were lots of ideas already in my brain

My next step is to Think of even better ideas

Week 10 Term 2

hello everybody now I am going to be talking about my soccer game we draw 0-0 all ya I cant believe that

First I didn't know that the game was drawing lunch time eating when I was shacking my boots outside Mrs Howard walked by and she said ¨come on mate the games starting¨ so I ran right away and I was there on time.

secondly when the game started we got in the box but some one got the ball it off me, I had a chance but I kept running I don't think I should have done that.

After that they got into the box but Ross our goalie saved it Ross is really good now that's all I can say for that half  now onto the second half the second half was boring I was off for the entire game my auntie came for the second half so there was nothing to watch involved with me because I was off.

Lastly when the game was over we had a drink and I said bye to my auntie there's nothing really to say eany more but there is one thing I forgot

overall I thought we did well but not good enough good bye everybody good bye.

Term 2 Week 9

Hello everybody I did my speech yesterday, who did it Micah did it of course when did we do it after morning tea of course, were ate school of course okay I'm going to stop talking. Mrs Graham said doing speeches is good for my confidence. 

First we needed to decide the order of the speakers, some people wanted to go first but the rest used a random chooser. I asked to go last and I did the reason why I wanted to go last was because I still wasn't shore how I was going to present it I didn't choose but I think I should have because I wasn't happy how I presented it.

Next we got the order Mrs Graham gave us time to have a drink of water and a practice I don't know why but I was doing well when I was practicing but I did bad when I was presenting it to the class "oops I shouldn't of said that yet sorry" said Micah "that's fine Micah" said Bob "O thank you Bob i'm glad you forgave me thanks i'll say it in two more paragraphs" said Micah "okay that's good" said Bob.

Then when we came inside feel inside and stuff like that o what sorry that's apart of a song sorry I don't know what's wrong with me when we came inside I lisent to the other speeches I was thinking should I piggy back how some people presented it or should I not piggy back hmmmm okay i'm going to decide i'm not going to piggy back i'm going to be unique but I was wrong I should have piggy backed I did terrible.

After that I did my speech finally I did not do well because I did not piggy back I was to fast not to confident I was bumed but for some reason I got good feed back I think it might be my topic my topic was my Mrs Howard should join rm 28/29.

Finally I finished up and  I still don't know why I got good feedback eany way I'm done bye bye what I need to tell you something i'll say it in the next paragraph.

Overall, I thought I did bad bye bye. see you later bye bye.

Term 2 Week 9 Hauora Activity

                                                                         My Reflection
I found this tricky because I could remember what it said but I didn't really know what some words ment so that made it tricky.
My next step is to learn more words so I know what they mean.

Term 2 Week 9

Hello everybody and I did my speech yesterday yes I am proud of it. I think I didn't do aswall as I thought I would but I don't care because even if I did well I would think I still wouldn't think I would make it in, but i'm still proud of it. It took a long time to be ready. my speech was  to slow but I got good feedback. I spoke to fast when I was reading and I figott to look up now that' s all I've got to say good bye.

Reorganising Information - Level 2

I found this easy because it tells you a little bit of information so it was easy to work out.
I found this hard because most of the time I was accidently miss some of the information.
My next step is to read so I don't miss eany information.

Reorganising Information - Level 1

I found this easy because it tells you a little bit of information so it was easy to work out.
I found this hard because most of the time I was accidently miss some of the information.
My next step is to read so I don't miss eany information.

Term 2 Week 7 My ICAS test

hello everybody and today I am going to talk about my ICAS exam I think  I did average I think I got about 88% that means I probably got 4 wrong but I am year 4 so I think I should have done better it was annoying because I mist half my lunch time checking over my ICAS test over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over again it was very annoying but it was a fun test I enjoy doing test's I like challenging myself I think this experience was actually pretty good thank you every body that listened to my blog post good bye.

Term 2 Week 5 New Timetable

On Monday room 28/29 had a change. It was to do independent learning now we are able to choose were we do your learning. I was so excited when I found out I felt so trusted from the teachers it was also my first time. I felt anxious at first but now I'm getting the hang of it. i'm not anxious at all now I have done 4 activities at the moment there are ten. I hope I can get adlest 9 done. I am so happy what we are doing at the moment. doing this the class has changed so much in a good way its so much funner than doing everything as a class this has been a life time experience I don't thing I will do this again in year 5 if i'm in a different class I hope next year, I will be in the same class so I can do the same thing.

27/5/15

Character Traits

I was learning to identify characters trait's and compare characters based on these traits I had found out how they treat people what they look like and how they feel the easiest one was how he felt like because the author told me right in the start the hardiest trait was how he treated people because it didn't tell me that much about that.

Addition And Subtraction

                                                            My Reflection
I am learning different  to solve addition and subtraction 
problems. I learnt rounding and compensating and P.V partitioning. 
Place value was easier because it's not complicated.
 I prefer Place value because it's an easier  strategie and it's good for everything. It got hard to understand at the start.
I enjoyed it because it was easy at the end.

Making Connections

Term 2 Week 5

On Friday Room 28 went to Te Tuhi. We learnt how to explain a story on a poster.  The story we were making was how 'The Kiwi Lost its Wings'. I made mine with Tanemahuta, kiwi, a tree and 3 bugs with a pond.  The posters were made from paper and we cut them out and glued it onto the paper.  We also drew things on it.

Chapter Book Challenge

Chapter Book Challenge

Chapter Book Challenge

Chapter Book Challenge

Book Track

• 100 World Challenge that's what I did on Tuesday my story was amazing I think it was the best we used BOOK TRACK we used amazing sound effects yup they were pretty amazing Deshontayne was my partner he had amazing ideas! and that's what we did on Tuesday. 

Chapter Book Challenge

Chapter Book Challenge

Chapter Book Challenge

Chapter Book Challenge

Chapter Book Challenge

Chapter Book Challenge

Chapter book challenge

Term 1 Week 5

Charlotes web

yesterday we found out where going to do a challenge about charlotes web and the activities are draw a spider and there's draw a basic spider draw a realistic spider draw a spider in a web those are all the cool drawings you can draw and there's farm to fork challenge and so much more like ven diagram and so much more 

My Pepeha

This is my Pepeha. I have been learning to introduce myself in Māori.  I also created some art to show my pepeha.

Charlottes web venn diagram

I have been learning to compare Wilbur and Charlotte

I found this easy because they have lots in common.

My next step is to think of more words to describe them

Chapter Book Challenge

Chapter Book challenge

Chapter Book Challenge

Exploring Stereotypes

Term 1 Week 7

Yesterday on Monday the Year 4's went to the storm water challenge. I got picked to do the challenge. What we did was the host told me, Shaniqua and Daniel a question and I needed to say buzz if I knew the question. Then the host would see if you got the question right and I WON the challenge. I got a bag for a prize.

T1 W8 Hundred Word Challenge

When I was strolling along I thought to my self I wish I had a pet dragon. And I wish I was friends with a flying Santa pig than on the corner of my eye I saw Smaug the dragon. Than suddenly I saw a flying Santa pig he shot Smaug with his icy powers but Smaugs skin was to hard. He said my teeth are like knives he bite Santa pig in half I saw joey the horse with Albert riding on him. Albert shot Smaug with a black arrow. And I lived happily ever after.