Thursday 12 May 2016
Never Hitch A Ride With A Martian
Reflection
I found this easy because I read it carefully.
I need to improve on using more meaningful words.
Tuesday 10 May 2016
100 Word Challenge
Where does the path lead to?
what sounds can you hear?
How does it feel?
what can you see?
The Village
once I was walking threw the woods I saw a path it looked like a passage way to maybe a beach or cascade but when I followed it it lead, me to a village there where statues at the side of me and then I saw a chief or some sort of leader he greeted me to his village and showed me around when I heard screaming from outside then out of the corner of my eye I saw men on horses with flames on sticks seating fire to the village I went outside and then I fell back and never woke up.
Reflection
I found this easy because last year we did the same thing as this.
I need to improve on using more meaningful words
what sounds can you hear?
How does it feel?
what can you see?
The Village
once I was walking threw the woods I saw a path it looked like a passage way to maybe a beach or cascade but when I followed it it lead, me to a village there where statues at the side of me and then I saw a chief or some sort of leader he greeted me to his village and showed me around when I heard screaming from outside then out of the corner of my eye I saw men on horses with flames on sticks seating fire to the village I went outside and then I fell back and never woke up.
Reflection
I found this easy because last year we did the same thing as this.
I need to improve on using more meaningful words
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