Fractured Fairy Tales

The ending of the story 

she started to walk towards the castle but then realised she had to walk through a screen maze but she saw yellow spheres all around the maze then she heard pwp pwp pwp pwp pwp then she ran out the noise got louder then she started to panic she ran through the maze and then saw ghosts pink, red, orange, blue, and green ghosts then she heard the pwp pwp pwp she saw a yellow figure eating with it’s mouth open she screamed and ran past every ghost the ghosts started to chase her then she saw something flashing blue and white and it looked yummy so she ate it and then the ghosts started to go away then she wasn't so afraid but she was still a bit because pwp pwp pwp she ran faster than she reached some how to get through the maze without a scratch then she reached this massive peach shaped hedge than she saw the green frogga wearing a peach costume and a horn then she saw princess peach with a go kart in her hand and a surprise box lying on the ground then sac-girl saw princess peach wack the surprise box and it went flying and then princess peach shouted I won after that sac-girl went and sneaked and saw princess peach going to kill the mad wralph than cupid popped out of mad ralph's head and the princess shouted get him so ghosts and space invaders started to chase cupid and then she followed cupid and where he was going then 2 hours later she saw a massive castle with armed minions then she said who are you going to fight and the minion whispered princess peach then she saw princess peach's army was fading away but then pwp pwp pwp then the army came and there was pac-man princess peach and here army then the minions charged and after 2 years of fighting the minions won but princess peach and pac-man were still there just the invaders and ghosts were dead then she saw them chasing her then she ran through the maze and went all the way where the mad Wralph lived but then pac-man court her and sac-girl woke up and saw sac-man and she saw a centipede climb up her shoulder.

My refelction 

I found this easy because I had a massive idea already in my mind

The story all put together

once a game ago lived sac-girl and her brother sac-man they were lying in the sun and playing on their devices, when sac-girl found a frog that looked like frogga. So she ran and saw it again she saw it go into the sky,  like he was going to heaven, so she climbed the tree and started going up like an angel going to heaven she screamed like a sloth but no one heard her. when she was in the clouds she saw some juice it said pls drink me so she drank it but then she saw a cake it said eat me pls so she ate. then she saw a door that was so small then she drank the juice but then she didn't realise there was a key on the table, so she ate the rest of the cake and took the key and drank the drink and put the key in the keyhole, and then she was in arcade land.when she entered she saw the mario brothers they where mario and luigi they looked fatter than the actual game when sac-girl said how do I get out they said go to the wreck it wralph man and fix it felix so luigi and mario told the direction and she stroked and went to wreck it wralph but on the way she saw frogga so she followed it and she came to a big tree house. when she went inside she heard frogga say him early I need to be there early then she came face to face but then he just carried on then when she came outside she saw some carrots so she ate them because she was starving but the rabbit said stop don't eat then you will become bigger but then she said that's just what I want she kissed the frogga and ate and ran away then she ran and saw centipede and sac girl mumbled how do I get out and centipede said go to the mad wralph she said how do I get there and he said go straight and then I don't know so she went strat but on the way she meet cupid then sac girl barked how do I get to mad wralph go left then turn left again then go straight and so sac girl went left then left again then she went strat and meet mad wralph at a tea party and fix it felix then sac girl asked at the tea mad wralph was having fun pouring into a tea cup on the fix it felix cap when the mad wralph saw sac girl and he shouted “Welcome!” and Fix it Felix also shouted “good aye!” they also both Mumbled “Come and join us!” then alice said okay and alice asked “I want to see the green Frogga where is it” then the mad wralph said at the princess peach's castle and pac mans castle so sac girl Whispered “Thanks” an dsac girl saw the massive pink castle with a peach logo on it and sac girl went to go and do her second adventure. she started to walk towards the castle but then realised she had to walk through a screen maze but she saw yellow spheres all around the maze then she heard pwp pwp pwp pwp pwp then she ran out the noise got louder then she started to panic she ran through the maze and then saw ghosts pink, red, orange, blue, and green ghosts then she heard the pwp pwp pwp she saw a yellow figure eating with it’s mouth open she screamed and ran past every ghost the ghosts started to chase her then she saw something flashing blue and white and it looked yummy so she ate it and then the ghosts started to go away then she wasn't so afraid but she was still a bit because pwp pwp pwp she ran faster than she reached some how to get through the maze without a scratch then she reached this massive peach shaped hedge than she saw the green frogga wearing a peach costume and a horn then she saw princess peach with a go kart in her hand and a surprise box lying on the ground then sac-girl saw princess peach wack the surprise box and it went flying and then princess peach shouted I won after that sac-girl went and sneaked and saw princess peach going to kill the mad wralph than cupid popped out of mad ralph's head and the princess shouted get him so ghosts and space invaders started to chase cupid and then she followed cupid and where he was going then 2 hours later she saw a massive castle with armed minions then she said who are you going to fight and the minion whispered princess peach then she saw princess peach's army was fading away but then pwp pwp pwp then the army came and there was pac man princess peach and here army then the minions charged and after 2 years of fighting the minions won but princess peach and pac man were still there just the invaders and ghosts were dead then she saw them chasing her then she ran through the maze and went all the way where the mad wralph lived but then pacman court her and sac-girl woke up and saw sac-man and she saw a centipede climb up her shoulder.

Term 4 Week 6 2015

MY BLOG
On Tuesday I got braces I got 6 at the top and 6 down the bottom. In the morning I was so excited because I was getting my braces. So I got all ready to go to the orthodontist. At 9 am we hoped into the car and we drove for 45 minutes we went to new market that's were we went to get my braces the company is called Alpers Dental.

When we got there went up the stairs and sat down to wait for the orthodontist to get ready. At 9.48 we went into the room where I was going to get my braces. When I was in the chair the orthodontist whispered "lets get started' so they got started. They whispered when we put the glue on your teeth and put the braces on the glue there will be a bright light. So I closed my eyes the hole time because I just felt like it and at the end they will use a bright light.

When I got my braces on I went to school at about 12.30 when I was in class everybody crowded jokes they didn't but lots of people asked why purple and why ye getting them so young man and you look swag with pink man THE END.

Fractured Fairy Tales Sac-Girl In ArcadeLand

2nd part of sac girl in arcade land 

when she went inside she heard Frogga say him early I need to be there early then she came face to face but then he just carried on then when she came outside she saw some carrots so she ate them because she was starving but the rabbit said stop don't eat then you will become bigger but then she said that's just what I want she kissed the Frogga and ate and ran away then she ran and saw centipede and sac girl mumbled how do I get out and centipede said go to the mad Wralph she said how do I get there and he said go straight and then I don't know so she went straight but on the way she meet cupid then sac girl barked how do I get to mad Wralph go left then turn left again then go straight and so sac girl went left then left again then she went straight and meet mad wralph at a tea party and Fix it Felix then sac girl asked at the tea mad wralph was having fun pouring into a tea cup on the Fix it Felix cap when the mad Wralph saw sac girl and he shouted “Welcome!” and Fix it Felix also shouted “good aye!” they also both Mumbled “Come and join us!” then sac girl asked “I want to see the green Frogga where is it” then the mad wralph said at the princess peach's castle and pac mans castle so sac girl Whispered “Thanks” an dsac girl saw the massive pink castle with a peach logo on it and sac girl went to go and do her second adventure.

Words Instead Of Said

My Reflection
I found this easy because I know what words to use instead of said because I have a big vocabulary
My next step is to use more exsotik words.

Term 4 Week 5 2015

                                 My Blog
                                     
On the weekend me and my family did fire works. We had massive ones. When the sun went down completely we went outside and started. We used small ones first we used some that where left over from last year. They where real small ones they span like a ball that was flashing and spurting out colorful sparks.

Next we used some bigger ones. The fireworks where white sparks but they where so loud. We used about 5 of those then we went for this big square one, it was a massive spark that was flashing white sparks into the air about 2 meters high. Then we did some more I can't remember some but I know they where cool. But I do remember that one was so cool it was like two big sparks that went into the air.

finally we did the biggest one it was massive and heavy for its size. When we lighted it we stepped back and saw 10 massive sparks blowing up in the sky it was an awesome night The end.

Language Features in stories

Lanugage Features in stories

Abverbs easily immediately eelegantly suddenly scarcely sweetly pretty bitterly beautifully certainly evidently brightly

simele Handsome like a tulip long as a thumb

adgective handsome golden-colored leaves velvet delicate graceful large managed barley corn flower tulip in appearance beautiful kissed real and little maiden polished, ugly cockchafers slim. cockchafers believed daisy loveliest  imagine tender delicate  Tiny blades dew twittered benumbed embed wallow remained burned disagreeable unwilling marry greater frozen  strongest uncovered, countries, whispered delighted.

describing words for Thumbelina the story

reflection

I found this hard because I't took so long and there where so many words I couldn't find them all even though it took me a long time.

Fractured Fairy Tail Term 4 week 5

Once a game ago lived sac-girl and her brother sac-man they were lying in the sun and playing on their devices, when sac-girl found a frog that looked like Frogga. So she ran and saw it again she saw it go into the sky,  like he was going to heaven, so she climbed the tree and started going up like an angel going to heaven she screamed like a sloth but no one heard her. When she was in the clouds she saw some juice it said pls drink me so she drank it but then she saw a cake it said eat me pls so she ate. Then she saw a door that was so small then she drank the juice but then she didn't realise there was a key on the table, so she ate the rest of the cake and took the key and drank the drink and put the key in the keyhole, and then she was in arcade land.When she entered she saw the mario brothers they where Mario and Luigi they looked fatter than the actual game when sac-girl said how do I get out they said go to the wreck it Wralph man and fix it Felix so Luigi and Mario told the direction and she stroked and went to wreck it Wralph. On the way she saw frogga she went and followed it and she hered it say I'm early so she kept following it until she found a massive lily pad house.

My reflection

I learnt that fractured fairy tales is changing the hole story exept the story line. My next step is to add more detail.

Narrative Writing Structure

World Cup Recount

MY Blog 

First On the weekends there was a rugby game it was a final All Blacks vs the Wallabies. NZ won 34-17. At the start Australia kicked of. We got the ball and ran with it we got tackled 100 times and did not get a try because they got the ball. That happened a few times but the on the 38th minute Conrad Smith passed to Aaron smith then Aaron smith passed to Richie Macaw then Richie macaw passed to Scutter and Scutter scored . Then the whistle went for half time.

Next Dan Carter kicked of new Zealand nearly got the ball then we tackled and tackled and tackled then we got the ball but then they got the ball and scored because Ben smith got sin bin yellow card for 10 minutes. then they scored again then Ben smith came on then we scored ma a Nono scored. then on the 79th minute when Buaden  barrette came on for Scutter then Ben smith did a grubber and Buaden Barrette kicked it again then he court it and he scored a try, Then we new we were the champions because they kicked to us and we kicked it out on the 80th minute. Then we got the gold medals and took the trophy home the END