Wednesday 27 August 2014

Using different language features.

I use different language features in my writing so people go wow and want to read my story. For my story about my lava lamp. I used onomatopoeia to make my story more interesting. 
I thought it was hard because it was hard to remember what I did 
my next step is to make it more interesting.  

1 comment:

Unknown said...

Lovely expression Micah! You have used lots of different language features to make your story interesting and I love how you read your story aloud. Great job!